Sunday, April 26, 2009

by Jen

at 6:14 PM
















FIRST TOUCH - by Jen

Even right up close
you stand calm, eyelashes still,
nose breath wuffling soft.
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3 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 26, 2009 at 10:25 PM

    Hey...I know that calm, eyelashes still,
    nose breath wuffling soft :-)

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  2. Robin LMay 1, 2009 at 9:49 PM

    Oo. Wuffling. Such a great word!

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  3. Thalia ChaltasMay 2, 2009 at 6:54 AM

    Very hard to give Jen's voice in haiku! It's so short! Perhaps a longer form like tanka, or a haiku chain. I'll keep trying! And wuffling!
    ~Thalia

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