Wednesday, October 21, 2009

by Jimmy G.

at 8:36 PM















Invasion of the Kingdom - by Jimmy G.


Ant brigade marching
around the toilet -
I lean over from my throne
squishing-squish-squishing
as fast as I can.
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2 comments:

  1. THALIA CHALTASOctober 27, 2009 at 11:10 AM

    Playing with syllables on this one. Haiku is really short for voice, so I extended things. Still feels very short!

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  2. Aleka Artemis MunroeNovember 5, 2009 at 5:47 PM

    Perhaps because life is short for ant brigade that march through houses.

    I loved it. Strong visual imagery. I'm feeling a little squeamish about all that squishing with bare feet (or so I imagine the scene from knees down.

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